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Written by Josie on May 25, 2004

Oh, how could I miss this one? *falls over* n_n* Sorry I didn't comment sooner...my excuse is I was being held hostage by.....um...mooses. Yes. ¬_¬*

*cough*

n_n* But anyways! Yay...its nice to see some more art from you again. And the subject up for discussion today is...pie? O_o* Ooo, I love pie! ^O^ Especially cheery, yummy...hehe, Toffie looks ready to pull up the plank, but Tobias is too busy dreaming to budge out the way. *giggles* n_n Perhaps hes dreaming about the possibly of fish pie? Who knows...=]

As Lolly pointed out, the only niggle is that box over yonder...*points* Its a bit lopsided. But you never know...could be a special box full of special lopsided things! ;] Or maybe some bruised fruit, hehe...=]
And the floe, the water around the bottom looks terrific, as if the box has just landed on it, lodging in the snow and causing a small tidal wave, hehe..n_n I'm wondering, did you come down with the box too? That would've been funny seeing a fox and seal pie-box riding in the sky! ;]

And good thing the pie was saved; I'm just wondering whats in the poor box which missed the floe...
George: Please dear god, not the marshmellows! ;o;
Hehe...would have ballooned to five times their size in water, so I'm guessing its not marshellows...=]

Again, beautiful art piece...and...erm...well, is there anything more to say? Nah, I'll just leave it at that; superb. n_n

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Tobias

May 26, 2004

eeeh, it's not that new, actually *points to date* mooses? eeeh, evil evil critters, ne? just capturing Koshi and holding her hostage .. beh, that's mean X3

Cherry pie sounds delicious .. even though we mainly have apple pie here (not that you can't get cherry pie, but apple pie is by far the most common pie you'd get =3 ) Fish pie? would people like that?

thanks for the critique, yes, the box is definitely all lopsided, I agree .. hehe, I didn't even think of what happened if marshmallows were in a box .. but I guess it would have gone poof and it would be raining (swelled) marshmallows all day long ;) (and again, the vocabulary you have amazes me =P yay for Josie!)

Josie

May 27, 2004

Gosh darnit, them mooses...*shakes her fist in an angry manner* They'll consume us all, one day! ;o;

Yea, cherry pie is splendiforous! ^o^ Especially warm from the oven, with hot custard on top...*dribbledribble* My, its pie fit for kings! Kings I say! X3
Mmm, apple pie is great...but it ain't a patch on cherry, huhuhu! n_n
Fish pie...hmm...I guess it could work. =]

Oh, yeah! That would be so awesome...to be raining marshmallows! Then you could stick yer tongue out, and...mmm! Free food! XD Lets hope that if it rains marshmallows in the Arctic, an aurora borealis won't get in the way and dye them all rainbow-y coloured. =3
But it would be very pretty. n_n
(my vocabularityly isn't all that great...lol...XD As you may have noticed in the last post, I spelt marshmallows 'marshmellows'. Bleh...I never spell it like that! I think I'm becoming delusional...*puts her hand to her forehaed and dramatically faints* n_n*)

Tobias

May 28, 2004

oh, hot apple pie from the oven with honey and cinnamon sure is something really delicious too .. cherry .. eeeh, I think it ranks up =3

I noticed .. and I actually wanted to spell it marshmellows too, but it looked a bit odd, so I took out my dictionary, and tada! found out it was indeed marshmallows. but don't worry, I bet I make plenty of spelling mistakes too, without even noticing it ^^;
*drags Josie to a seat and puts ice on her forehead* ^^;

Josie

May 29, 2004

Oh, apple pie with honey sounds delicious! ^o^
Ok, I guess cherry and apple pie are even. ;P

Yee, I always thought marshmallows was a nicer way of saying it too...I mean, marshmallows aren't exactly mellow now, are they? X3
Ah, teh spelling mistakes...they plague us all. n_n

*shivers* Brr...cold! n__n* I need some hot apple pie now....=9

Tobias

May 30, 2004

hehe, I didn't even realize mellow was an actual word .. see? that's how you know that's not my native language .. even though I sometimes already know enough to chuckle when seeing certain misspelling and typos ;)

mep, as long as you don't faint again, it'll be just fine. Apple pie? uuh .. I only have tea, does that count? ^^;

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